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Estrella

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3,930 years have passed since that final date, the date in which Estrella was murdered by vicious Trandoshans and his one and only father. Afterlife did not prove faithful to Estrella, he believed he deserved a final standoff, something important to change the galaxy. Not only did Estrella alone seek this wish, Sheev Palpatine himself wished this upon Estrella after hearing numerous tales regarding his passing from his master, Darth Plaguis. In his available time as Chancellor, Palpatine performed an alchemic ritual to bring Estrella back to life to serve Palpatine. Once resurrected, Estrella did not have the power and agility he had back then after the Mandalorian War, he felt weakened and defenseless. Palpatine laughed at the Mandalorians resurrection occurred. “Finally, my plan can be completed with my servants by my side,” Palpatine said with his Sith powers blossoming throughout his body as a sign of ecstasy. “I am no servant nor will your animosity persuade me, I prefer vengeance and I shall have it. I wish to cut up my father and mercilessly slaughter every Trandoshan within my grasp... and with your unique abilities you shall help me”. Without any hesitation, Palpatine shot lightning out of his fingertips to subdue Estrella, however, with a quick leap Estrella flew next to Palpatine and raised his vambrace vibroblade up to his neck. “Very good Estrella Ordo… hahaha!” Palpatine screeched, “I will not ask again sorcerer, assist me or perish on your bewitched half.”. The arrogance escaping Estrella’s mouth did not seem to be tolerated by Palpatine as he began to send shocks throughout Estrella’s Mandalorian armor.

As Estrella passed out due to the extreme force he endured, once he woke up, a hooded man held him in plasma cuffs to prevent escape or any peril. The hooded man threw Estrella into a solid cell with no weapons or security whatsoever. “You will like it very much here Bounty Hunter…” the hooded man mumbled as he walked away. After in solitude for a couple of hours, unusual men returned to Estrella’s cell and continuously tortured him to their heart’s content. Estrella then thought of a plan to escape, as the next prison-keeper returned to the cell, Estrella quickly grabbed hold of the enemy’s elastic whip and wrapped it around his neck to subdue him. Estrella then snuck out of the cell, he discovered all of his equipment within the warden’s office wardrobe and noticed his helmet was missing. Estrella found a series of security footage within the warden’s terminal and tracked down the warden to a cliff overlooking the prison facility they kept Estrella at. While he saw the warden wearing the Mandalorian helmet, he also noticed the hooded man standing next to the warden. With almost any hesitation, Estrella used his vambrace to shoot directly through the warden’s heard and then once at the hooded figured. “That’s no way to treat your friend” the hooded man yelled as he pulled down his hood and slowed the blaster bolt to a stop with his force capabilities. In astonishment, Estrella circled around the bizarre old wrinkly man that seemed to wield a silver and leather cushioned curved lightsaber. Once Estrella grabbed his helmet and equipped it, the man said: “Fortunately for you, I have a mission.”. Uninterested, Estrella began walking away. “Your father is dead, he has been dead for plenty of centries now. Canderous Ordo. So assist me or you could be reacquainted with your father back in your deathbed.”, said the old man. In understanding, Estrella agreed to the man’s proposition and from then on received various tasks, such as assassinating senators that dangered Palpatine’s plan. One such mission included guarding the old man while on a mission to construct an agreement with the ancient legends of Kaminoans that seemed to have developed the secret to cloning. The old man was able to agree with the Kaminoans by threatening them and killing a couple to make them convinced. Thankfully, this worked and the Kaminoans began production on a clone army. Not only that, but Estrella also was able to guard the old man while recruiting trainers known as cuy’val dar to make sure the newly developed clones were at their full potential during future battles. One cuy’val dar included the notorious Bounty Hunter, Jango Fett as well as Kal Skirata.

These events have led to Estrella being able to gather all clone troopers to devise a secret plan to first eliminate Palpatine and then the hooded man. Next part of the plan would be to build an army off of the Jedi’s spare soldiers and wage war on all Trandoshans and hopefully make them extinct. Estrella sought out this plan and almost completed it, however, due to Estrella’s interference with time and fate, his journey came to an end when the Venduuli of all galaxies banished Estrella to exile on a far away realm known as Reborn due to his disruption in time’s date. This realm was completely free of time and all time collisions ceased on this planet, each individual was branded a misfit by the Venduuli. Soon enough, Estrella learned peace and prosperity from his great friend Croc, the leader of all the misfits in total. To trick the Venduuli we constructed factions that could wage war on another to distract the Venduuli of any evil schemes. Luckily this worked and Croc was able to construct a plan to escape the realm of Reborn. We constructed a space shuttle that was able to fly into orbit and land on Venduuli’s prison planet, and some ancient Sith misfits utilized their alchemic powers to summon the Venduuli and eliminate him. Unfortunately, this did not work, 120 misfits died in the process. However, Estrella was able to drag chains upon the Venduuli’s head and crash upon him onto the realm of Reborn tethering him to Reborn’s planet so he may not interfere with the time continuum. Both Croc and Estrella were unsure of what to do from then on. They and 10 other misfits discovered ruins of statues resembled chairs. Upon eons, the 10 misfits including Croc and Estrella realized they were unable to age or be killed, nor could they escape. Instead, they found a new power to harvest that even the Venduuli was attempting to find once long ago...
 

Steely

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The Story of Steely

When I first joined I became a Jedi spending most of my days looking in the Tython cave looking for a better crystal. After a few days and finding an epic I get captured by the Inquisitors, Scared for my life I let the dark side run through me and converted. Now as an apprentice filled with hatred for the Jedi Order for not attempting to save me I went on to start slaughtering Jedi. A few weeks go past and under Old Jar Jar I achieve the rank of Lord, I have been in IG for two days while on duty at the elevator guarding the button a Grey Jedi named Croc appears confused about this he passes me and goes up the elevator, Then The Emperors Voice calls all IG up what I see was the voice sitting in his chair with the Grey next to him scolding us how he could of been an assassin I own up to my mistake begging that no IG should be punished for my mistakes. This was good in the Voices eyes and he requested I stayed in there expecting to be Exiled from the Sith or worse I stood there waiting to be punished but the Voice had other ideas he chose me to be his advisor to show me the ropes behind the Sith and to make sure this problem wouldn't happen again a few days go by and this is where i obtain my very first legendary from the words of the voice “I cant have my Advisor looking poor” and hands me the Emperors First Hate. Surprised by his generosity but then i seen the dark side in him a disrespectful apprentice had caused problems with him being caught his saber forced from him, the Voice pushed him down into the pit calling him to be killed with no means to defend himself. More than ten sith jump down to execute that apprentice unable to jump out the pit or defend from what was about to happen to him. After this I went off planet for a few months returning once and again to find that the voice who i advised had left his position and left the galaxy for good. I then took took the position of Captain of Bladeborn to help train the new bladeborn members under miraak, During a Dark Council meeting Prelude, Miraaks second in command had been voted onto the council I then took the postion of Head of Blade and temporarily Head of Assassins. During Darth trials there was three that the council wanted to pass this was known as the Councils Golden Three which had Savage Opress, Myself and Serin after finally achieving the rank of Darth i felt proud i felt i had power. After Emperor Fives stepped down i supported Zil in the efforts to achieve the throne and become Emperor after he fell in combat I decided i would take the Throne against Moxxi and his forces outnumbered I fled to Tython in the efforts to save myself as I put myself into self exile I was granted the rank of Master and through hard work and determination I was voted on to the Jedi Council under Grand Master Kopavi, Two months has pass of me being on the Jedi Council I let my anger run through me again and I return to the Sith with open arms after working my way to lord and being a PGT, Empress Caitlyn has an overthrow called on her myself being PG protect her with my life in the Sanctum push after push failed from the overthrowers eventually we push out and hunt all the traitors trying to kill the Empress. I find the caller of the overthrow and after him running i eventually land the killing blow I bring his head to the Empress and i am awarded for my defence and killing of the overthrower with the rank of Darth and Elite Praetorian Guard, A few weeks pass and with the Empress no longer in power I am the Viceroy making sure the defense of Korriban and the Emperor is top drawer after many moons of protecting the emperor i was handed Shadow General, For me being handed shadow general was so disrespectful i resigned and later left korriban for some time, I was approached by the Voice of Emperor Riddick he wanted me back on Dark Council but not looking after an org to be the Hand of the emperor I accepted the offer and became the Hand of the Emperor after going about with normal duties a hand does I found an Overthrow group being the hand I and taking no prisoners I killed the organizer and Exiled another for plotting an overthow. This is where things get twisted for Steely as Emperor Riddick had abandoned the throne so the Voice Sickman can claim and Myself being promoted to The Voice the highest honour to be the voice of the emperor, many moons pass again and Emperor Sickman plans to hand it down to someone but he has many choices it lands to myself or Jump seeing each other has a threat negotiations take place to see who has the ideas of each other if they were Emperor, It fell down to three options, 1: Just wait and see who sickman picks 2: a 3v3 Kagath or 3: All out war. Being cocky I choose All out War which led to the fall of Steely beaten in a Duel the fate of steely sealed.
Steely has seen many emperors come and go. Many apprentices, Lords and darths killed for treason, disrespect and just stupid things. Many more Emperors come and go many apprentices, lords and darths killed but for Steely he awaits his return and he has his eyes set on the Hand of the Iron Emperor, His name Ryan Rose.

(this is a story of my character Steely my death to jump was the first time i had been pk'd ever)
 

Estrella

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The Story of Steely

When I first joined I became a Jedi spending most of my days looking in the Tython cave looking for a better crystal. After a few days and finding an epic I get captured by the Inquisitors, Scared for my life I let the dark side run through me and converted. Now as an apprentice filled with hatred for the Jedi Order for not attempting to save me I went on to start slaughtering Jedi. A few weeks go past and under Old Jar Jar I achieve the rank of Lord, I have been in IG for two days while on duty at the elevator guarding the button a Grey Jedi named Croc appears confused about this he passes me and goes up the elevator, Then The Emperors Voice calls all IG up what I see was the voice sitting in his chair with the Grey next to him scolding us how he could of been an assassin I own up to my mistake begging that no IG should be punished for my mistakes. This was good in the Voices eyes and he requested I stayed in there expecting to be Exiled from the Sith or worse I stood there waiting to be punished but the Voice had other ideas he chose me to be his advisor to show me the ropes behind the Sith and to make sure this problem wouldn't happen again a few days go by and this is where i obtain my very first legendary from the words of the voice “I cant have my Advisor looking poor” and hands me the Emperors First Hate. Surprised by his generosity but then i seen the dark side in him a disrespectful apprentice had caused problems with him being caught his saber forced from him, the Voice pushed him down into the pit calling him to be killed with no means to defend himself. More than ten sith jump down to execute that apprentice unable to jump out the pit or defend from what was about to happen to him. After this I went off planet for a few months returning once and again to find that the voice who i advised had left his position and left the galaxy for good. I then took took the position of Captain of Bladeborn to help train the new bladeborn members under miraak, During a Dark Council meeting Prelude, Miraaks second in command had been voted onto the council I then took the postion of Head of Blade and temporarily Head of Assassins. During Darth trials there was three that the council wanted to pass this was known as the Councils Golden Three which had Savage Opress, Myself and Serin after finally achieving the rank of Darth i felt proud i felt i had power. After Emperor Fives stepped down i supported Zil in the efforts to achieve the throne and become Emperor after he fell in combat I decided i would take the Throne against Moxxi and his forces outnumbered I fled to Tython in the efforts to save myself as I put myself into self exile I was granted the rank of Master and through hard work and determination I was voted on to the Jedi Council under Grand Master Kopavi, Two months has pass of me being on the Jedi Council I let my anger run through me again and I return to the Sith with open arms after working my way to lord and being a PGT, Empress Caitlyn has an overthrow called on her myself being PG protect her with my life in the Sanctum push after push failed from the overthrowers eventually we push out and hunt all the traitors trying to kill the Empress. I find the caller of the overthrow and after him running i eventually land the killing blow I bring his head to the Empress and i am awarded for my defence and killing of the overthrower with the rank of Darth and Elite Praetorian Guard, A few weeks pass and with the Empress no longer in power I am the Viceroy making sure the defense of Korriban and the Emperor is top drawer after many moons of protecting the emperor i was handed Shadow General, For me being handed shadow general was so disrespectful i resigned and later left korriban for some time, I was approached by the Voice of Emperor Riddick he wanted me back on Dark Council but not looking after an org to be the Hand of the emperor I accepted the offer and became the Hand of the Emperor after going about with normal duties a hand does I found an Overthrow group being the hand I and taking no prisoners I killed the organizer and Exiled another for plotting an overthow. This is where things get twisted for Steely as Emperor Riddick had abandoned the throne so the Voice Sickman can claim and Myself being promoted to The Voice the highest honour to be the voice of the emperor, many moons pass again and Emperor Sickman plans to hand it down to someone but he has many choices it lands to myself or Jump seeing each other has a threat negotiations take place to see who has the ideas of each other if they were Emperor, It fell down to three options, 1: Just wait and see who sickman picks 2: a 3v3 Kagath or 3: All out war. Being cocky I choose All out War which led to the fall of Steely beaten in a Duel the fate of steely sealed.
Steely has seen many emperors come and go. Many apprentices, Lords and darths killed for treason, disrespect and just stupid things. Many more Emperors come and go many apprentices, lords and darths killed but for Steely he awaits his return and he has his eyes set on the Hand of the Iron Emperor, His name Ryan Rose.

(this is a story of my character Steely my death to jump was the first time i had been pk'd ever)
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CMDR Croc

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Ventum got 1st, Faerie 2nd, and Cactus 3rd.

Serin gets a special mention with honorary 4th, and Spectre gets a solid good try.

Prizes are 100$ on store for 1st, 60$ for 2nd, 30$ for 3rd, and 10$ for 4th.

Contact me for whatcha want.
 
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